Rule+no.+1


 * 1) Click EDIT, then, on a NEW line, type your sentence. It must be original--not from the powerpoint or from a class activity.
 * 2) Put your NAME AND CLASS PERIOD in parenthesis after your example like this- (Terry T. pd. 9)
 * 3) Then look at the other sentences and comment on at least three of them. You can state if you think it is a strong or weak example, an unusual use of a particular word, etc. POSITIVE or CONSTRUCTIVE feedback only!
 * 4) After each comment ALSO put your NAME AND CLASS PERIOD in parenthesis like in #3.
 * 1) After each comment ALSO put your NAME AND CLASS PERIOD in parenthesis like in #3.

** *MAKE SURE TO CLICK "SAVE" AFTER YOU FINISH ON EACH PAGE!! **

Your requirements for credit are....
 * 3 sentences using different words on EACH PAGE
 * THREE comments on other examples on EACH PAGE.
 * Your NAME AND PERIOD next to each post you make (otherwise I won't know to whom to give the credit.)


 * RULE 1: In the present tense, singular verbs end in the suffix s;plural verbs do not. **


 * EX: The elephant trumpet s for a peanut. **
 * EX2: The elephants trumpet for peanuts. **


 * SENTENCES: **

Except for Sam, my kids all have blond hair, making him an anomaly in our family. (Mrs. Thomas, p. 9)

George practices gymnastics and parkour every weekend, making him an agile person. (Liam p4) I liked how you mentioned both activities; you certainly have to be very agile to do them. (Juan Jose Castro, P.2) What a good and creative example Liam (Tomas, P6) I like how the sentence matches the word, good use of agile (Javier Cabrera p.6) Some people hate being under control of an autocrat. (Liam p4) Although many students claim to suffer that at school, it should be extremely harsh to actually be under control of an autocrat. (Juan Jose Castro, P.2) Bob Jones follows his diet strictly by being abstemious and eating right. (Liam p4) It is said that in the future we will have a food shortage; Bob is trained to survive it! HAHAHAHA ( Juan Jose Castro, P.2) Very clever sentence! (Gabriella G p.4) Great use of the word!(cristina lg P.4)

Manuel is the only one, that cant rolls his tongue, he sometimes feels like an anomaly in the family. (Isabel Ruiz P.2) -I think this sentence is wrong, it should be Manuel can't roll his tounge. (Andrea Pd.6) -I agree with andrea you should change this (Josh J. P:4) All my friends are staying here on vacation, but im going out of the country because I acceded to go with my family. (Isabel Ruiz P.2 -Nice way to use the word! (Marian P.2) Vasco likes to plays with any ball, it could be bigger than him and still play with it, this makes him very affable . (Isabel Ruiz P.2) I like this sentence, its very funny! (Lucia G. Pd2) The verb you used was "likes" which is right, but "plays" should be "play". (Corey p.4)

- The sharks bite people as sign of fear; with time, their bodies and soul will ameliorate. (Juan Jose Castro, P.2) Marvelous, sir (Diego, p5) I am glad that you dont bite Juanjo, very good example (Tomas P6) - The student hates that some teachers feel like autocrats. (Juan Jose Castro, P.2) Yes that pretty much sums up what I think of my teachers, great example.(Pedro V, p6) Its a true example, great work! (Javier Cabrera P.6) - Jonathan Edwards attacks the people that aren't completly religious; he used to do this in an acrid way. (Juan Jose Castro, P.2) Good job! You used the rule correctly! (David p.4) Great job you really know how to use the rule and apply it to thngs we have seen ( Cristina LG P.4)

The girls seem to be affable since they are always smiling. (Shanelle Andres, P.2) Splendid! (Diego p5) Shani your sentance is great! (Natalia Ordonez P4) Great job on your sentences! (Daniela Rios P2) This is a great sentence (Josh J. P:4) Sam tries to ameliorate the awkward situation by changing subject. (Shanelle Andres, P.2) - Great example Shanelle! (Camila S P4) In the story of the Odyssey, Ulises proves to be a very astute man. (Shanelle Andres, P.2) -> True! I liked how your used the grammar rule! (Jane P4)

My dog loves playing with new toys, he is adamant when it comes to playing with them, he doesn’t let anything distract him. ( Lucia G p.2) - Great sentence Lucia! (Antonnia Bickenbach p.6) Dogs love playing with any type of toy; I once saw a dog giddily playing with an antediluvian stuffed bear.( Lucia G p.2) My sister appreciates the strictness of my parents when she was young, because that is what encouraged her and helped her reach the apex of her career. (Lucia G p.2) Wow! Great sentence Lucia! This is a great example. (Silvana M, p2)

Even though my dog is very AGILE, he moves slowly when i call him for dinner. (Cristina LG) Good use of the word agile, nice sentence1 (Javier Cabrera p.6) The puppies seem AFFABLE with their new home. (Cristina LG) Milo likes to plays with the new toys, but the other puppies play with the rope so he feels ANOMALY (Cristina LG) - Even though Maria is very **agile**, she ** move//s// ** slowly as she walks to class. (Michelle p.4) - Clever sentence, Michelle! (Shanelle Andres P.2) this is a great example, good job! (Lucia G pd 2) - Maria **feel//s//** a great **ardor** as she approaches the camp fire. (Michelle p.4) Great use of the word ardor, very clever!(Camila A p.6) - Today we can see Maria is in a bad mood because she **talk//s//** in a very **acrid** tone. (Michelle p.4) great example and the word fits well in the sentece! (Marcela Pd.6)

1. Lions act very acridly when it comes to protecting their family. (Jane P4) - Great job Jane! (Camila S P4) Nice job Jane! (Mariana p2) 2. My dog runs for hours until it reaches to the apex of the mountain. (Jane P4) - That is a great example, Jane! (Shanelle Andres P.2) I really like this example of apex! (Natalia Ordonez P4) Great use of the word apex! (Maria Alejandra P.2) 3. Camila is so affable that she always helps me with my homework. (Jane P4) Good job, very descriptive word.(Camila A p.6) What a good sentence, it is a great way to show the meaning of the word. (Carolina p.2)

The parrots accede with the dog's opinon on abortion.(Diego p6) Good job using the word! (Camila A p.6) Very accurate use of the word accede diego!!!(Alejandro S p4) I think you did a great job! (Josh J. P:4) The parrot accedes with the dog's acrid opinion on abortion. (Diego p6) Excellent job Diego, BTW would you like to play soccer today?? (Tomas P6) His snail tries to ameliorate the relationship by bringing him cupcakes every morning. (Diego p6) Great example Diego! good job using the word. <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">(Marcela Pd.6)

1. My sister always accedes to help me in my Math homework, when ever I have trouble. (Silvana M, p2) -> Great sentence and a nice sister Silvis! (Jane P4) 2. Even though he is old, my dog is agile because he likes to run and excersise all day long. (Silvana M, p2) - I like the way you use the grammar rule! (Camila S P4) 3. Many countries throughout history such as Russia, Cuba, and China have had autocrat rulers. (Silvana M, p2) This example really shows the meaning of autocrat (Natalia Ordonez P4)

1. The dogs are very agile when running. (Camila S. P4) -Good sentence! Simple, but I like it, it gets to the point. (Andrea Pd. 6) 2. My cat is so astute that he can easily catch mice. (Camila S. P4) -> Good sentence Cami! I could understand the word easily! (Jane P4) Congratulations! Way to go (Mariana p2) 3. The avarice of my cat is so great he won't let anyone come near his food. (Camila S. P4) - Great job Camila! (Antonnia Bickenbach p.6)

- The bakers turn the oven to it's apex temperature. (Natalia Ordonez P4) great example!! (Marcela Pd.6) Wow! it really shows the meaning of the word! (David p.4) Great sentence Natalia! Way to go! (Isabella N p6) amazing Nate! clearly shows meaning (Cristina LG. P.4)

- The bakers were astute by turning the oven temperature down. (Natalia Ordonez P4) Your sentence really shows the meaning of "astute", it was clearly written! (Silvana M, p2) I can see how you used the rule in this sentence. (Carolina p.2) You really know how to use this rule! Your sentences rule! (Isabella N p6)

- At the bakery the bakers greet you in an affable way. (Natalia Ordonez P4) - I like your sentence; it really shows the meaning of the word "affable" and the SV agreement is correct! (Shanelle Andres P.2). Very good sentence, I always wondered if it was only me who the bakers greeted in an affable way. (Pedro V, p6) This is very true! Great way to show the meaning of affable, this might be because you are a very nice baker too! (Isabella N p6)

1.He seems to have no option but to acquiesce to every single thing his mom says. (Marian P.2) good sentence! its very true sometimes ;) (Lucia G. pd 2) Great use of the word acquiesce. (Michelle p.4)  2.All of these books state an affable topic which makes them more appealing for younger kids. (Marian P.2) Good sentence Marian! Easy to understand :) (Silvana M, p2) 3. My astute brother knows when to stop talking. (Marian P.2) - Great example Marian! You used the rule and the word from the vocabulary list very well. (Antonnia Bickenbach p.6)

1. The little boys run from the mean man; he is not very affable. (Andrea Pd. 6) Great xample Andrea! (Isabel R, P.2) 2. Martha wants to abet Lydia when she cheats on a test because she does not want her to fail. (Andrea Pd. 6) Good use of the word! (Isabel R, P.2) 3. The cats meow to show how much they want to abjure the fact that they can't live inside the house anymore. (Andrea Pd. 6) I liked it sentence a lot! (Isabel R, P.2)

1. The astute boy knows how to solve the math problem. (Antonnia Bickenbach p.6)- I Like the way you used this word! (Marian.P.2) Easy to understand, good job! (Mariana p2) 2. The girl is happy when her crush accedes to play with her. (Antonnia Bickenbach p.6) - I like this sentence, it's true and cute. (Andrea Pd. 6) 3. In the race the agile boy beats everyone by 30 seconds. (Antonnia Bickenbach p.6) Great use of the word! (David p.4)

<span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">1. In Thailand a <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">thief robes <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> my cellphone and ipod, he was so <span style="color: red; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">agile <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">on taking my stuff real fast without me notice it. (Marcela Pd.6)- <span style="color: #fa30a3; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif; font-size: 9.5pt;">Very good sentence Marce! It is very-self explanatory (Gabriella G p.4)

2. The police that attend me talks in an acrid tone, which scared me. (Marcela Pd. 6) I like your sentence! Great use of the word and rule! (Erika van Bilderbeek P.2) 3. My friends tried all their best to ameliorate their test grades.<span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> (Marcela Pd.6) Marcela, great job on the sentences! (Maria Andrea Sanchez P2)

<span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">1. The citizen hates the autocrat ruler. (David p.4) <span style="color: #fa30a3; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">Great way to use autocrat! (Gabriella G p.4) <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">2. The man exhibits the antediluvian painting in the museum. (David p.4) <span style="color: #af00ff; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">David great example for the word antediluvian! (Maria Andrea Sanchez P2) <span style="color: #2a45ff; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">Great sentence to explain what antediluvian is!(Alejandro S p4)

<span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">3. The student prefers to ask the counselor, probably because she is affable. (David p.4) Great use of the word affable! (Carolina p.2) David, I like how you used the word affable. At the same time the sentences is coherent and follows the rule accordingly. (Laura Rodriguez P.4)

<span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">1. The astute politician understands he must be affable to the masses. (Javier Cabrera p.6) Great sentence. I liked how you used 2 words. (Liam p4) <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">2. The police officer acts in a very autocratic way. (Javier Cabrera p.6) Great use of the word. (Liam p4) 3. The unicorn jumps to the apex. (Javier Cabrera p.6) Interesting. (Liam p4) That must be a magical unicorn, nice sentence. (Pedro V, p6)

1. Her father uses a very acrid tone when he is mad. (Carolina p.2) Carolina! Excellent sentence! I really like how your sentence structure! (Maria Andrea Sanchez P.2) 2. His brother is very agile when he plays soccer. (Carolina p.2)- Carolina, I really like your sentences. Great use of the word acrid. (Michelle p.4)

3. My friend is very astute when she lies to her sister. (Carolina p.2) I think this is true for everyone, good example! (Corey p.4)

1. The cats treat was trapped in an agile way by the dog. (Maria Andrea Sanchez P2) - It looks like you understood the rule very well. Good job! (Erika van Bilderbeek P.2) 2.The boys seem to always be affable because they are constantly singing. (Maria Andrea Sanchez P2)- Nice use of the word and of the rule (Marian P.2) 3. My hamster loves to eat carrots, she is adamant when it comes to eat them, she never shares! (Maria Andrea Sanchez P2). Maria Andrea, what a great sentence. It is self-explanatory, great sentence. (Michelle p.4)

1. Gandalf helps anyone out of good will, he is adamant (Pedro V, p6) Very good use of the word adamant(Alejandro S P4) 2. The hobbits are very astute and know who to make friends with. (Pedro V, p6) Great job Pedro! I think it is very astute how you use the word in the sentence. (Santiago Acero p.6)

3. The dark lord Sauron rules as a complete autocrat. (Pedro V, p6) Pedro, I like how you used the word autocrat in a simple but concise example. Great job following the rule! (Laura Rodriguez P.4)

1. Hogwarts boy was very astute when using magic. (Tomas P6)

2. The unicorn jumps to the apex of the castle. (Tomas P6) //Funny sentence! I liked it, good use of the word! (Vyvyan p4)//
3. Ron Weasleys friend had a lot of avarice. (Tomas P6)

<span style="color: #fa30a3; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">Maria Jose practices <span style="color: #2a45ff; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">guitar and drums every Wednesday as a method to <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">assuage <span style="color: #2a45ff; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;"> her stress. <span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">(Gabriella G p.4) Good example and use of the vocab word! (Corey p.4) <span style="color: #fa30a3; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">I practice <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif;"> the piano on the weekends to <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">assuage <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">all my school work. (Gabriella G p.4) I think you used very well the word in the sentence. (Santiago Acero p.6)

<span style="color: #fa30a3; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">Mrs. Thomas is <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">affable <span style="font-family: Arial,sans-serif;"> since she is always welcome to helping her students. (Gabriella G p.4)

1. The boy only abjures the girl’s offer in front of his friends. (Corey p.4) Simple but good example (Carter, P4) 2. Some people switch out of AP classes in order to alleviate their work load. (Corey p.4) 3. Jonathan Edwards uses an acrid tone in his sermon “Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God”. (Coreyp.4)

1. __Harry Potter's scar__ has been known to cause __acrid__ tones when talking about it. (Alex V p.6) Good vocab use (Carter, P4) 2. Mad Men is a show fit for only audiences that like antediluvian themes. (Alex V p.6) Very good use of the vocabulary word! (Pablo p.2) 3. __Mercedez-Benz__ is a car company which manufactures the __apex__ of luxury cars.

====<span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">1.The <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">girl uses <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;"> her voice to the <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">apex <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;"> of her lungs. (Isabella N p6) //I like the way you had the sentence and used the word! (Vyvyan p4)// ==== <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">2.The <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">mouse feels <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;"> the <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">ardor <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;"> of the cats claws on his gentile skin. (Isabella N p6) <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">3.The <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">robber expects <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;"> no <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;">astute <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,'Times New Roman','Bitstream Charter',Times,serif;"> detective behind his crimes. (Isabella N p6) Fun sentence (Carter, P4)

1. Her parents were able to arrive to the apex of the mountain. (Mariana p2) 2. The girl feels ardor when the feather touches her skin. (Mariana p2) Very good sentence (Pablo p.2) 3. Some students ameliorate their work for a higher grade. (Mariana p2) Nice example! (Maria Alejandra P.2)

1.The president disagrees with the proposal but at the end he accedes to do the plan. (Maria Alejandra P2) 2. Sam knows that his best friend is very agile. (Maria Alejandra P2) 3.The student feels very stressed since he knows he has to ameliorate his spelling. (Maria Alejandra P2)

1. John abets Carlos to go and hit the teacher for not letting them go to recess early. (Alejandro Serrano P4) Alejandro, I think that you used the vocabulary word correctly and at the same time you followed the rule. Great job! (Laura Rodriguez P.4)

2 . The group abjures Phillip's belief in Santa Claus. (Alejandro Serrano P4) //Aw, that's sad but good sentence! (Vyvyan p4)//
3. His aunt's abstemious attitude, made fred think it twice before smoking. (Alejandro Serrano P4) Great sentence! I like how you used the word abstemious. (Erika van Bilderbeek P.2)

1.The government accedes  to some of the ideas that are put forward by the citizens to improve the city. (Laura Rodriguez P.4) This is great Laura, are you one of those citizens? (Isabela U. pd. 4) 2. My cat knows when I'm taking him to the vet because he is very astute. (Laura Rodriguez P.4) 3. My parents dance randomly in the street, this makes them aloof persons. (Laura Rodriguez P.4) Hahaha very random and very good! (Pablo p.2)

1.The comapnys accept the aloof requirements and conditions from the government (Pablo p.2) 2. My dog is so astute that he bites every piece of cloth he sees, but lets go when I get home (Pablo p.2) Very good example of the word astute! (Maria Alejandra P.2) 3.The monkeys landed in the apex of the mountain (Pablo p.2)

1. The Sheriff sentences all criminals to large amounts of time in prison, people say he has a very acrid personality. (Carter p.4) 2. My uncle hikes up mountains, he will not stop until he reaches the apex. (Carter p.4) I love the details after the main idea! (Isabela U. pd. 4)

3. Dave is a very adamant person, he always finishes what he starts. (Carter p.4) Nice job Carter, the sentence shows you understood the rule very well. (Santiago Acero p.6)

1. The agile ballerina dances on her tipy-toes during the entire show. (Erika van Bilderbeek P.2) Great job Erika! I can picture the agile ballerina. (Isabela U. pd. 4) 2. I accede to kill the crawling bugs that enter my house. (Erika van Bilderbeek P.2) 3. The dogs barking keeps me up all night, so I no longer have aloof dreams.(Erika van Bilderbeek P.2)

1. The boys abet Tomas to play a joke on the teacher. (Santiago Acero p.6)

2. The girl abjures his proposal to get married. (Santiago Acero p.6)

3. Alejandro accedes to the job proposal he got last week from the multinational company. (Santiago Acero p.6)

1. Her boyfriend abets her on the weekends. (Isabela U. pd. 4) 2. Mariana acquiesces about her opinion based on women rights. (Isabela U. pd. 4) 3. “Go out!” says the man in an acrid tone. (Isabela U. pd. 4)

1) The Chicken is very abstemious when it comes to eating. (Joshua J. P:4)

2) The Women Abets the men into killing the wolf. (Joshua J. P:4)

3) My grandmother accedes me whenever I say it is my sisters turn to clean the kitchen. (Joshua J. P:4)